Performance in the morning sunlight


#1

Be easy on me guys, it’s my first poem! :oops:
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Petals float around my spiritual face,
screaming for release and special peace.

I lay the petals into their restful slumber,
I return to deliver my respects and pour my heart through the soil.

Arising through the soil, breaking through the ground,
shining through the petals again risen is the sunlight which is forever.


#2

Congratulations on your first poem :slight_smile:
I like it.




#3

Very Nice! I also like it


#4

Thanks everyone : )